Maria Maple and Zaber Fang (Work In Progress)

[mariamaple]

Name: Maria Maple
Callsign: All Set and Ready To Go
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Height: 5,7
Weight: 156
Hometown: Liger Base
Employment: Zoid Warrior
Strengths
1.) Athlete
2.) Communicating with certain zoids.
3.) Piloting Skills

Theme Song:

Appearance: Maria has redish gold shoulder length hair and aqua eyes. She does not carry a staff and she does not have wings. She wears Mechanical fox ears and fox tail. She also weras a locket on her neck with a picture of her family. She wears an eyepiece for comminication if her zoid is out of commission.

Personality: Maria is a very brave and nice girl. She can get scared when she’s about to lost someone close to her. But she keeps her head high and has confidence in herself, her family, and her Zoid. Maria is also very athletic. She loves to be with her family, friends, and her Zoid and she also loves going into zoid battles. Maria is very energetic and very adventurous.

History:


Zoid: Zaber Fang Old
Status: Normal
Rank: D
Description:

Offense: Close Range
Defense: Stealth
Strategy: Tactical

[Rui Zeal]

sorry for taking so long with this(lost the site URL) I know that this is still a WIP, but I'm going to start reviewing it anyway, as it looks like you're mostly done; your Callsign is supposed to be just a single word, maybe followed by a number. I assume your height is in feet/inches, but your weight, I need to know what system of measurement you're using. You're going to need more in the way of both appearance and personality. And as far as your zoid goes, there is no E-shield option for defense, nor does the Sabre Tiger even have an E-shield. Also, there is no 'Liger Base' for you to have as a home town, so I assume that you're going to explain that in your history, but I thought I should give you a heads up on that.